New feature

The new feature is a look inside my writing process. I am going to post a rough draft version of a story and solicit advice about it. I may take advice, I might not. This story still has a ton of work before I am happy with it, but I am going to post updates as I work on it. Any and all feedback is welcome, unless it is just going to be a personal attack or a judgement of my character. That feedback will be promptly ignored and thrown in the grabage.